Friday, September 2, 2011

4/19/2013

I am about to complete the second volume in my series of novels about Homo Evolutis. Its working title is Evolutis Rising. This trailer presents the basis for the stories. I am updating The first novel, Deadly Awakenings, along with an extended version of Onset (please see below.)

I am excited about this novel. A publisher has asked for the complete manuscript and as soon as I get permission, I will post a sample.






This is one of the best presentations about epigenetics I've encountered. He speaks fast at times, but delivers an excellent overview.







OnSet/ReSet - a new, richer story in development that begins with the award winning novela, Onset. 



OnSet/Reset completes Chloe's awakenings by an in-depth examination of how she became the first Cohort to discover the true purpose of Homo Evolutis.

Here is a special preview. I hope you enjoy it. Remember?

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"Reality is that which, when you stop believing in it, doesn’t go away."
Philip K. Dick, author
 
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Part II ReSet

Chapter 27 ~ Penetration

A brilliant flash of light flooded the waiting room to be followed instantly by a crash of thunder that shook the windows. “That one hit the O’Quinn tower!” squealed an excited high school girl. The half-dozen students, assembled for the next campus admissions tour remained glued to the window watching the Rice University students below who scrambling off the open quad from the approaching storm. Lightening filled the sky above the tall medical center buildings across Main Street. Small pellets of hail peppered the window at a strange 90-degree angle. A hopeful co-ed laughed. “There goes a run-away umbrella!”
While the rest of the group hung together exchanging banalities, twelve-year old Kyle Henderson sat stiffly alone in the center of the many leather chairs provided by Rice Admissions Office. Bored watching the slow moving fish in the tank by the trophy case and disdainful of the giggling gaggle of girls by the window, he focused his attention on a clear plastic ball powered by an enclosed Mongolian gerbil. He assessed the rodent’s skill at avoiding table legs and floor lamps as it rapidly completed its fourteenth circuit of the comfortable wood paneled waiting room.  Observing the frantic scamper within the plastic sphere, wondered if it was trying to escape and didn’t know there wasn’t an escape hatch.
Uncomfortable in his fake school uniform, Kyle alternately tugged at his gray shorts and then his sagging knee socks. He felt silly wearing the tie and cap that came with the uniform and didn’t understand why they were important to his mission.
After they dropped him off at the entrance to the campus, he barely waited for the limo to drive out of sight before he yanked his tie lose and tossed his cap in a near-by trashcan. As he walked toward the quad, he removed a shiny black yo-yo from his blazer pocket and carefully rubbed it between his hands. It felt surprisingly warm to his touch.
“Do you see the sign to the Admissions Office?” said the voice in his ear.
“Yes.” He carefully replaced the black yo-yo in his pocket. “Odd, you chose that shape.”

Watching the girls lean on the wide windowsill, he placed a finger in his right ear and spoke quietly in his throat like a trained ventriloquist. “This is stupid. Why don’t I just walk in?”
“Follow the plan.”  
Cursing to himself, he frowned at the giggling girls stealing glances at him. When they caught him watching, they turned away to whisper and laugh. They smelled of too much perfume, he thought.
He caught a buxom redheaded girl staring boldly at him as he brushed his silky white-blond hair out of his eyes. He felt her round green eyes studying him as he had studied the gerbil. When she refused to break eye contact, Kyle angrily glared until she turned away. No one outlasted the penetrating stare of his icy blue eyes.
A flash of lightening and blast of thunder sent the fish in the nearby aquarium darting for cover. He watched their futile attempt at concealment behind the plastic rocks and greenery and thought, do fish understand or even know about the existence of water? Is it beyond their perception?
As though announced by the sound of thunder, an assistant admissions director entered and introduced an energetic young co-ed as the tour guide to the girls. He smiled at Kyle and told him he was in a separate group and his tour guide would be there in a moment.
Although his face remained blank, relief swept through Kyle that he wouldn’t have to walk with the immature girls. They quickly left the waiting room, hesitating long enough to sneak a parting glance at him and the fish while avoiding contact with the perpetual motion machine at their feet. He caught a few throwing one last appraising glance his way.  Although he knew there was something odd about him, he feigned indifference. He didn’t like that they stared at him.
After the last girl closed the door behind her, Kyle wandered over to the window and looked down on the quad to see what had held the girls’ attention moments before. The wind continued threatened the storm’s arrival with dust and flying debris dancing in disjointed rhythm. A few remaining students scampered for cover.
The door behind him opened and a tall skinny student in jeans and a black tee shirt that read “I’d kill for a Nobel Peace Prize,” entered and leaned on the windowsill next to him.  “So, I hear you qualified for a special, very early admission.” He didn’t look at Kyle, but waved below to a running co-ed. “Real early, I’ll bet. How old are you?”
Kyle knew they had put fifteen on his application, but casually said, “Twelve.”
The tour guide looked at him and folded his arms. “No shit man, really? What are your scores?”
“800s.”
“In the writing section too?”
“Yes.”
“Damn. Well, your card says you’re interested in genetics. The director told me to get you into the special session in the Molecular Bio Lecture Hall today. Still want to go?”
Duh! What did he think! Kyle couldn’t imagine why the tour guy couldn’t just stick to the schedule.
“Yes. That’s all I want to see.”
“So you don’t mind if we skip the library?”
“Right,” he said, with returned sarcasm. “Take me to Dr. Stosak’s lecture.”
“Hey, you know about Dr. Stosak? She’s a Rice grad who’s a Nobel –”
“Yes, yes. I know.” he said, dutifully following the guide. Glancing at the noise of plastic on the hardwood floor, Kyle saw the plastic ball slip between him and the closing door and thought, free at last and kicked the rotating rodent down the hallway.

It started to rain and the guide took off yelling over his shoulder, “Hurry, or you’ll get soaked.”
Kyle quickly caught the lanky guide and passed him and several others rushing toward the lecture hall’s entrance. Extra security measures had taken up most of the lobby’s space, thereby creating a bottleneck and delayed entry into the building. An impatient collection of wet students, faculty, and guests jammed the entrance. Twisting his shoulders and pressing against the hoard, Kyle managed to thread his way through the crowd to finally stand at the end of one of the three long lines waiting for a security check. His tour guide caught up only because he flashed his ID and said he was with a child.
Kyle looked around at the growing crowd and asked him. “Do you have to get checked like this for all your classes?”
“No way, man. Today’s a big event. We’ve got some VIPs.”
When they entered the final leg of their checkpoint queue, an agent asked them to step aside. Both were scanned and searched. The tour guide tried to joke with the agents saying something about dwarf assassins, and was immediately whisked away to a side room by two agents. A third agent told Kyle he had to wait.
His ear bud crackled. Get into the lecture hall and make contact before it starts.
He didn’t reply. The voice in his ear could hear, and probably see everything. Kyle approached a security agent and mustering up as much angst as he could plaster on his face said, “How long will you keep my guide? I have to pee. Is there a men’s room nearby?”
An agent pointed to an adjacent hallway beyond the other two security lines. “There’s a small office john at the end of that hall, kid. Use that.”
Kyle, acting as though he had an urgent need, immediately jogged toward it. He heard another agent bark, “Hey, Parker! You know you need to keep the kid in sight. They said to watch everyone that gets this close.”
The agent put his scanner down and began to work his way through the crowded lines of people toward the bathroom. The storm had driven the people to push their way inside and the area outside the lecture hall had grown crowded beyond capacity. Agent Parker was barely able to push his way through the last line in time to see the boy enter the office area’s small men’s room at the end of the hallway.
When the agent stepped into the restroom, he observed the boy standing at the sink next to the single stall, carefully wiping the handle of a stiletto.
The agent put his hand on his gun and held out his arm flashing his security ID. “I'm Special Agent Parker. Where did you get that knife?" He wasn’t concerned and said gently, "Put it down, kid.”
Kyle shrugged and acted nervous. “It was just on the floor by the stall. It’s pretty.”
The agent motioned with the palm of his free hand. “Put the knife down and step away from the sink and the stall.”
After the agent motioned for him to stand aside, he took out his gun, and approached the bathroom’s single stall. He pushed open its door with one hand. Seeing it empty, he holstered the weapon and turned around.
The boy had moved behind him and stood still, watching. His eyes blinked slowly. The voice in his ear bud said, “Kill him, Kyle.”
He looked up at the agent facing him standing in the doorway to the toilet, nodded and announced, “I don’t need a knife.”
Jumping chest high, he leaped toward the agent. His kicked his heel into the agent’s sternum, splitting it and crushing his heart. He was dead by the time he fell into the toilet.
Kyle looked at the clean knife in the sink.
The voice spoke, “Leave it. You still have a security check ahead.”
He removed the black yo-yo from his blazer and slipped it in his pant’s pocket before trashing his jacket and button down shirt. All that remained of the school uniform were the khaki shorts, t-shirt, and topsiders. After he turned out the light, he casually left the men’s room and walked down the hallway toward the crowd. Seeing his tour guide still loudly protesting his treatment at the hands of security on the far side of the auditorium entrance, Kyle inconspicuously re-joined the closest line and waited his turn to enter the auditorium.
Once inside, he asked a student if the short woman at the lecture table down in the pit was Dr. Stosak.
“No, that’s Dr. O’Quinn from Johns Hopkins. The taller woman is Dr. Elizabeth Stosak.”
He walked down the aisle toward them thinking, I still don’t need a knife.
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ReSet is the complete story about Chloe Russo. It is written to be read on its own or as a sequel to Onset.

EXTRA! 

The Ghost in my iPad and named FINALIST for 2012 Global eBook Awards

ONSET Nominated for 2012 Global eBook Awards 
Check them out! Click on cover.

The Stop
My inspiration for this Flash story came from seeing a contest. I had no idea what the plot would be until I wrote the first line. The rest came immediately. The edits lasted three days. I had no thoughts of publishing it until I heard the reactions of my Critique Circle. They laughed and groaned at the right places. I hope you enjoy it. 
 
 Breaking News
  •  I have updated The Commitment. I hope you enjoy this story of one solution to finding ling-lived love.
  • My wife, will co-author a series of paranormal mystery stories for tweens with me. We are working on the 'pilot' and hope to have it ready for the holidays. She has been my editor and guide for several years. This will be our first formal collaboration. The series will retain the title The Ghost in my iPad and will chronicle the adventures of a very young detective who solves crimes with the help of a ghost in his iPad. I'll post our progress. 
  • We have started the second story and code-named it 444. I picks up where the first story ended and will be ready by Christmas.  

Featured Story
Onset can be reviewed on HarperCollins' site by clicking on the book cover in the left-hand column. The novella follows the rules of the Cohort Universe and tells the story of a young college woman, Chloe, who has taken on a summer job in a hospital that specializes in cancer treatment.  She has been hired by the Human Resources department to be a patient point of contact for patients who have limited family support.

Onset
E L Russell

Reality is that which, when you stop believing in it, doesn’t go away.
—Philip K. Dick, author

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Prologue

The bike race started at the art museum and went twice around the city reservoir, one kilometer away, before returning to the starting point. Chloe trained for the 10k race as though it were a sprint. Close to eighty racers had signed up but in her mind it was a two-woman race. Kelly McGinty was always her toughest competition and today would be no different. They were friendly enemies. That meant in Chloe’s book they were friends after the race. She assumed Kelly felt the same way.
She smiled to herself and thought, Kelly’s going to have plenty of time to read the number pinned to the back of my shirt today.
“Watch out for that set of twins from Pittsburgh, Chloe.” A close friend advised. “They trained all summer in those hills.”
“Damn, and me without a rear-view mirror.” Chloe grinned at her own trash talk and checked her chain. She rubbed a section with an oily rag and wiped her hands. “You and I both know there’s only one other serious cyclist here.” She spun a tire and checked its treads.
Her friend mocked her comment by making binoculars with her hands to scan for that serious cyclist among the numerous other contestants checking their equipment.
Chloe laughed. “Right. Funny. Like you don’t know I’m talking about Kelly McGinty over there.”
As they walked their bikes out of the parking lot to the staging area, her friend said, “The two of you have taken turns at first place all season. Who’s got the gold today?”
Chloe didn’t reply. Her mind focused on the race now and Kelly would take the back seat and eat her dust in this one. An air horn signaled a warning that the race would start soon and the thirty-eight racers took positions in the pack. Chloe saw Kelly and moved closer to her.
“Hey, Kelly.” She waved. “Good race, girl.”
“That’s woman to you, kid.” Kelly could trash talk too.
Chloe hooted and gave a thumbs-up. She adjusted her helmet and fixed her eyes on a spot fifty meters down the road. Her eyes never strayed from the target as she stretched her long body, flexed well-developed shoulder muscles, and cracked several neck vertebras.
She commanded her legs get there in 3 and tensed them like a jack-in-the-box just as the starting gun sprung her lose. Her mind heard the shot after her body had completed the first stroke. Tendons and tungsten flexed and strained with each turn of the pedals. She flew past her 50-meter mark and exhaled for the first time. Her mind switched to a mental map of the flat course. So much for the Pittsburgh twins. There were no hurdles to think about other than relentless acceleration.
After a quick kilo, the course entered the reservoir circle with ninety-degree turn to the right. That would be her last slow down until they left the circle after two-four kilometer loops for the final dash to the finish.
Chloe loved to train. Each athletic workout presented an individual challenge and each race became a competition not only for the win, but striving for her personal best. Having the endurance to do it, she held to her all-out-sprint strategy.
Without glancing back, she sensed Kelly was close. She once said she always knew when Kelly was near. She felt her now and pushed on hard.
The low stonewall that surrounded the reservoir loomed ahead and indicated the first of two right turns. Police and red traffic cones reduced the four-lane start of the race to only two around the circle. Chloe hated any slow down, but an ill-taken turn here could send her on a slide over the low stonewall into the open, deep water of the city reservoir. It was a hazard all the racers took seriously.
Several police stood near the approach. Chloe knew the line she needed to take and stroked into it, leaning and gliding through without sliding and without much loss of speed. Clear of the turn, she allowed a quick glance over her right shoulder where she saw the pack well behind, preparing to turn. She immediately selected another spot fifty meters ahead and sprinted for it with the same concentration she would give to the finish line.
Chloe barely noticed the spectators who used the reservoir wall as a coveted spot to watch the race up close. She was less aware of police whistles and shouting. Something was going on but her concentration remained on Kelly. She felt her close behind her, catching up. Kelly had closed the gap, which was unusual and disturbing. Odd. Kelly usually made her challenges at the end of the race, and why was Kelly yelling?
Digging deeper, Chloe lowered her head and began to increase her speed. From the corner of her left eye, she saw the front wheel of a Kelly’s bike. They were almost even and Kelly was still yelling.
I don’t think so, girl, she peddled harder, still focused on the road ahead. She felt Kelly pull closer. They were side by side. Get your ass back in the pack – The roar of an engine screamed in her head. She felt a wave of heat. Something shoved her to the right.  A tremendous pressure slammed from behind, she fell, tumbling...
Blackness. 
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Two years later

Dave Westfield, an unemployed P.I. and ex-traffic cop stood sweating in hospital scrubs on an underground parking lot ramp. His ample body, almost hidden from view in the shadow of a small recess, filled the tiny alcove.  The walls, covered with black tire streaks and chipped concrete, spoke of failed attempts by drunk or stoned basketball fans racing to join the traffic jam upstairs.  His lips smacked in cadence with his hammering heartbeat as he nervously chewed two sticks of gum
He knew exactly where to stand so the security cameras couldn’t see him. His instructions had been very clear about that. The voice in his earpiece surprised him, “We are two minutes out. Do you have the package?”
“Yes.”
“Wait.”
A sound of squealing tires fighting the continuous left-hand turn up the long spiral announced the coming of another car below. Cars made Dave nervous, but pickups scared the hell out of him. He struggled to press his butt inside the shallow sanctuary and feared his gut wasn’t out of rear-view mirror range.
“Level four?”
“Check.”
“Be ready to hand us the ear piece and the envelope.”
“You have my money?”
“When we make the exchange.”
“Check.”
Dave edged toward the curb.  He removed his earpiece and slid a large yellow envelope from under his sweaty scrub top. A black limo rose from the bottom levels and slowed as it drew close. Unable to see through its tinted windows, he hesitated. The rear window opened halfway to reveal a black-gloved hand waving a small white envelope.
Recognizing the offer, he walked backwards up the ramp trying to match the limo’s progress. He held the damp envelope and earpiece in one hand and tried to reach into the half-open window.
The limo accelerated slightly and Dave turned sideways to keep up. He caught the flash of reflecting sunglasses in the dark shadows of the limo’s back seat. A gloved hand snatched his envelope, knocking the earpiece out of his hand. He caught a glimpse of the tiny pink device rolling down the ramp. In a split second, the limo accelerated away diverting his attention to a white envelope spinning in its wake and falling to the center of the oil-stained ramp.
He swore as he ran to pick up the envelope. Hah, Darkwood my ass. I got your prints now, you bastards.
He heard the diminishing squeal of departing tires from the ramp above. Stuffing the envelope in his thigh pocket, Dave resumed the long climb. Out of shape and out of breath, he stopped to rest at a “No Pedestrians” sign, where he spat out his gum and leaned on the ramp’s wall to take the pressure off his overworked lungs.
Distracted by his labored breathing, Dave didn’t hear the silent approach of a truck behind him. The sound of a peal-out scream of spinning wheels came too late for him to avoid the accelerating pickup. It slammed him into the wall and held his twisted body above the concrete walkway until it backed away to let it slide down.
The driver jumped out of the pickup and examined the broken body.  He quickly located and opened the white envelope to make sure it contained the money. He noticed Dave’s arm move and grabbed it with both hands, pulling his body to the left edge of the ramp. He wrestled it over the top of the retaining wall, letting it drop it to the basement, four floors below.

In the limo, the woman wearing black gloves tore open the large sweat stained envelope and carefully examined its contents. Shouldering a phone to her ear, she said with satisfaction, “Colonel, I have them. He obtained the x-rays, a DVD, and a message from our man inside.” She waited.
“Of course I will, Colonel.” She read it aloud. “I have confirmed that the candidate has the special brain tissue we seek and that it clearly has the extra anomaly. I await your instructions.”
She listened to the phone as she repackaged the items. “Yes, the team’s in place. They are monitoring the candidate and can initiate extraction at any time.” She took the phone in her hand. “Of course, our man will let us know the minute they schedule the candidate for treatment.”
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Chloe knew she was driving too fast… again. She would be late for the first day of her summer job at the hospital no matter how many gas stations she cut through to beat a traffic light. Worse, she wasn’t a hundred percent confident she had the correct directions. They sounded simple enough, after all, Aunt Doris had attended Rice, and the campus was just across the street from the Medical Center.
“Go south on Montrose until you run into a circle around a big fountain. You can’t miss it darlin’. If you do, you’re in the Zoo.”
Damn, she thought. Missed the turn and the zoo. It’s back to the circle to try again. She approached the fountain for the second time and accelerated around it.
Through breaks in the dense canopy of oak limbs, she caught glimpses of the university on the right and huge buildings on the left of Main Street. It had to be the Medical Center. She was close. She shook her steering wheel and said, “Crap, I’m so late I’ll be fired before I start.”
A string of red traffic lights supported her frustration but gave her an opportunity to gawk at increasing numbers of medical personnel in scrubs, construction workers in hard hats, and joggers in very little. It was barely after eight thirty and it was already 87 degrees. “Ugh,” she grumbled, “I’d rather be with the joggers than dressed up for first impressions.”
At the last red light, she called to a cop, “MD Anderson?”
“Left ahead and move it.” He yelled back, waving her on.
Thank God. She thought and pulled her van into the covered valet parking and hit the switch that transformed the back of the van into a ramp. She unlocked her chair to back up and turned around to roll out on the van’s ramp.
Free of traffic and the confines of the van, Chloe spun a one-eighty, as the attendant presented the parking ticket. She hit the button on her key chain to close the ramp and tossed him the keys.
He grinned and pulled the tip of his visor. “No problem. We get our share here.” He pointed to her chair. “You race with that? Your wheels tilt in.”
“Sure do but this one’s for city driving. I use the speedster in the van for serious haulin’. Check it out.”
Chloe spun away with a few strokes of her string arms. Coasting, she ran her fingers through her long brown hair stretching her shoulders and thought, I found the building, now all I have to do is to locate the Patient Services office for my orientation meeting that started twenty-five minutes ago.
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Dr. Deal paced behind her desk as she spoke in her cell phone. “Yes, we’ll monitor her closely. She hasn’t made another attempt –” She listened and waited until the caller stopped. “Yes, I know how important this is and I assure you –” She nodded. “Trust me, Q. She’ll be fine.”
The call completed, she looked at her watch and checked her appointment book, and it reminded her that the new girl was late, and it’s her first day.  
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A quick mention of the book covers you see on the left. At the top, in COHORTS UNIVERSE, I will publish all my notes, research, and rationale I’ve collected for the past two years developing a ‘universe’ that is a consistent logical basis for almost all of my stories. I took what we now know of genetics and brain development and extrapolated into the near and far futures.***     
The Cohorts stories are driven by the conflicts and pressures new technologies place on individuals and society. For example, assume we suddenly discover that the life span is growing at a rapid rate. The majority of people, throughout the world, begin to live to 120 years of age and even beyond. What are the consequences to individuals? Families? Social Institutions? Governments?
     Pretend you are in a college dorm and you have all night to sit with your buds (of all kinds) and kick this around. You quickly run through some of the obvious consequences, like who’s paying for social security and other entitlements? Now what? I hope my stories raise questions you may not have anticipated.
     The second story, To Find a Thief, is not limited to the Cohorts Universe. It is a very short story that I wrote after hearing about Flash Fiction for the first time.
     The third story, Bottoms Up is about misuse of Epigenetics. As I say on the book cover, “…don’t do it just because you can.” This story has a female character that appears in other stories. My only regret with Bottoms Up is that I didn’t title it “BottomsUp” (without the space). I use Google to see how close to the top of the list my stories are displayed. You know, marketing. They all do quite well except Bottoms Up seems to be used heavily in soft porn of all genres. Oh, well.  
     The fourth story, The Commitment looks at a bittersweet reaction to the death of a partner. It doesn’t come as a surprise to Alice as you can gather from the first sentence. “Alice knew it was time for Fred to die.” The story has humor. Really. 
     The fifth story, Sniper POV has a touch of the Twilight Zone to it. That’s all I’ll say. After all, it is another Flash Fiction, so if you read it, I’m okay having you wait another 90 seconds to know what I meant by that.
     The sixth story, Critique Circle, is a example of what might happen in a writer’s critique circle. My fellow writer’s share their work and ask for feedback. I think most readers will like the humor in this Flash Fiction story.
     The writer’s guild I belong to plans to publish a collection of short ghost stories. This is new territory for me and I want to learn how to write scary.
     What’s the best way to do that? READ several scary books. Write a short story, share it with your Critique Circle (which could be virtual – go ahead, Skype!), then rewrite, rewrite, rewrite… 
The last two stories, Onset and The Ghost in my iPad, are novellas and are works-in-progress. I hope to have both completed before the Holidays.
Onset tells the story of a young college student who is given a summer job as a Patient Advocate in a large urban Hospital. (That’s her in the wheelchair). The cover gives a hint about the story. There’s humor, romance, and with some science fiction sprinkled in. Both science and science fiction adhere to the rules in the Cohort Universe. Some of the characters appear in other stories.
The Ghost in my iPad tells the story of a young boy, still feeling the loss of an older brother and his apprehension about the presence of a serial killer in his community. He discovers that his primary vehicle for escape, his iPad, offers the possibility of companionship beyond his comprehension. There are moments of humor, fear, compassion, and revenge.
I hope you will enjoy both of these novellas.


ALERT
I urge all readers take caution when receiving unsolicited offers from any source that just seem too good to be true.
 If you like to research this for yourself you might start with Science Fiction & Fantasy Writers of America’s site:
Science Fiction & Fantasy Writer of America
 

Wednesday, August 31, 2011

Welcome


Welcome to my blog. If this ‘place’ had a t-shirt it would read:  “I’m a Raconteur and a Writer Wanna-be.”
     In the Spring of 2010, my wife, gave me a membership to the Houston Writer’s Guild and signed me up to attend their Spring conference.
     I did not know how to write. I’m a math major. We don’t do papers. However, in one of my careers I researched new and interesting technologies for my company. I wrote white papers for mid and upper management who had little time to read. If you have any experience reading essays, a white paper is like an up-side-down essay. The conclusions, including possible impact to ROI  (Return On Investment), are presented first. When I discovered that good stories must have a hook upfront, I was thrilled. I mistakenly thought, “Now I know how to write my novel.”
     That moment is called an ‘up’. There are also ‘downs’. There are many ‘downs’ that writers must endure.
     This is my list of bottom line recommendations for new writers, of all kinds.
  • Join a writer’s guild, association, club, or group.
  • Attend their critique circles or start one.
     A critique circle (cc) meets often enough for each of the 6 to 10 writers to bring sufficient copies of 200 lines of story content. The writer, or someone else in the circle, reads his or her work aloud. Notes are made on each copy and a brief discussion ensues. I’ll post the rules of engagement we use later. Just know that the critique circle is (can be) a valuable experience. The ‘can be’ will be included in the post on cc rules.
  • Attend workshops. Look for short classes by respected writers. (That usually mean published.)
  • Most of all, write. I know it’s a cliché for some, but set a time, make a space, get ear plugs if you need to, but write, write, write …